Have you ever live in command economy. If you have been live there, you must understand the sadness and the sorrow of the people that always have to listen to the government. Command economy both negaatively and positively effect people life. Positive make people can live in peace and negative make people have to obey the government and listen to them even if they are wrong. This esaay is about the positive side of a command economy. If people have to choose between Northern and Southern US, the people should choose Northern US because the southern is more in command economy. Good side of command economy is when people want to live in peave and the government will protect them. People that live in command economy only have ONE type of shop in a village and the don't compete with each other. These ideas are important to people because if the people want to live life with no competition, that people should choose to live in command economy, for example: North Korea. But if you don't want to, you bettr stay out of it if you want to improve your life because command economy don't make you richer, you just going to stay the same. In the story: The Wise Old Woman, the great lord force alll of the old people have to go up to that high mountain to died there, even if the people in the village don't want to put there mom and dad up there, the have to obey him. Those how command economy work out.
My grandmother is one of the people that have live in North Korea: COMMAND ECONOMY! she sell hair assessories there and that whole big village only have her shop that sell hair assessories so the people don't have compete against each other. Most of the people don't really live life in command economy because it make your life much harder then Market economy. Market economy can improve your live alot but it opposite for Command economy, my grandmother decide to move because she want to improve her life and not always have to stay the same like this.
I have that the people can choose a right country that you want to live in depend on your personality. So if all the people want to live in a better life, you should rather choose market economy.
I like your end paragraph. It sound cool and it make people want more. It conclude the begining paragraph and I think you did a better job in this conclution paragraph.
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